I stain glassed the You and Mind and crystalized the Fixed and also slanted it to show that it was different compaired to the others, meaning it was the one that needed to be fixed, since its the word "fixed". Again symmetrical since it is centered. Out of proportion from the up sized words. i dont know what the rhythm is, if it has one. I think the unity in it is good, used the color red just cause i like that color.
Great quote. I love the emphasize that you put on this it's easy to spot and looks really nice and uniform. The "fixed" adds a lot to the quote since its in a different direction. :)
I like the quote. 'one eles' is a little strange. can't -apostrophe. Try some overlap. The texture on the words can be too much, try letting the simplicity of the words take over. Size,Kerning, Color etc. The quote is a bit stretched out...make it compact and you'll gain emphasis.
Ah, you made a quote from the depths of your mind, as did I. Very nice indeed. Kudos
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure what you were trying to say in the explanation, but the emphasis is right.
ReplyDeletereally good quote especially since you thought it up all by your self!! good emphasis!!
ReplyDeleteI stain glassed the You and Mind and crystalized the Fixed and also slanted it to show that it was different compaired to the others, meaning it was the one that needed to be fixed, since its the word "fixed". Again symmetrical since it is centered. Out of proportion from the up sized words. i dont know what the rhythm is, if it has one. I think the unity in it is good, used the color red just cause i like that color.
ReplyDeleteI love this quote. I wish people would stand by this quote, maybe we would be a whole lot better. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteGreat quote. I love the emphasize that you put on this it's easy to spot and looks really nice and uniform. The "fixed" adds a lot to the quote since its in a different direction. :)
ReplyDeleteI like the quote. 'one eles' is a little strange. can't -apostrophe. Try some overlap. The texture on the words can be too much, try letting the simplicity of the words take over. Size,Kerning, Color etc. The quote is a bit stretched out...make it compact and you'll gain emphasis.
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